Friday, October 7, 2011

THE HUNT

A young boy named Dead Eye was on a hunt for elk. When he realized he had went in to another clans boundaries, the Flathead, he was shaking like he just taken an ice bath. He was a Blackfeet Boy but he wanted to get an elk. Dead Eye didn't want to be caught in their territory. The problem was that he had no idea how to get out. So he slept in a tree.
He woke up to see a seven point elk under the tree he was sleeping in. He knocked his arrow on his bow to kill the elk. Dead Eye let the arrow go. Thunk! Then he saw his worst night mare … a Flathead. He knocked an arrow to try to stay alive so when the Flathead man saw him he could fight. Then he saw him look his way so he pulled the string back and let the arrow fly.
He saw the arrow  would hit the man in the gut that was from the Flathead. So Dead Eye welled in panic. Then he saw fifteen Blackfeet warriors coming at the Flathead man. He screamed like a three year old .The warriors shot the man and the he fell to the ground.
The elders said Dead Eye was lucky to be alive. Although he was in trouble they had a party for him. Then they drug Dead Eyes' elk into the village. The oldest of the women then started to tan the hide. Finally they were done.

1 Comments:

At May 8, 2017 at 11:01 PM , Blogger Unknown said...

I was inspired by how you made the story exciting at the start. I would like to know more about Dead Eye. I noticed that you used a lot of detail. From my perspective Dead Eye is brave.

 

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